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    merhaba yeni üye oldum foruma. Böyle bir writing ile yaklaşık kaç puan alabilirim ?

    The Effects of Deforestation


    Deforstation is a situation that results in devastating effects.Not only the ecosystem and nature are being affected
    but also people. Some of these effects range from starvation to global warming. Our world prones to these bad effects
    in recent years.

    One of the dangerous effects of deforestation is starvation. Many of our forests which are the main sources of oxygen have
    been destroying for such reasons like building a construction and cultivation. If the forests destroy in a mindles way,animals
    living in the forest can became extinct in several decades. Therefore, the ecosystem will bw disturbed and starvation will be
    an inevitable result in this way. For instance, if an animal which is a food supply for people extincts, people are more likely to
    seek for another animals. However, if the other animals extinct,people have to seek for one another. This circle will certainly
    be deadlocked one day. Consequently,people may more likely to suffer from starvation and also animals will, too.

    Another effect of deforestation is global warming that is known as climate change. As we know the limit temperature of the
    world has been increasing to a high level year by year. Huge glaciers are melting in the North Pole and in The Antarctic.
    Therefore , sea level has been raising approximately 0,1 mm in a year. We can learn more about this increaisng from scientific
    studies about global warming. Because of the increase in sea levels, coasts of countries are morelikely to be under water.

    To sum up, climate change has dangerous effects on the world and on people. It should be regarded as the main environmental
    problem. We should take some measures like not to use sprays that reveal harmful gases to the atmosphere. For a good living ,
    we must be aware of these hazardous results.

    bazı yazım hataları yapmışım . düzeltilmişi;


    merhaba yeni üye oldum foruma. Böyle bir writing ile yaklaşık kaç puan alabilirim ?

    The Effects of Deforestation


    Deforstation is a situation that results in devastating effects.Not only the ecosystem and nature are being affected
    but also people. Some of these effects range from starvation to global warming. Our world prones to these bad effects
    in recent years.

    One of the dangerous effects of deforestation is starvation. Many of our forests which are the main sources of oxygen have
    been destroying for such reasons like building a construction and cultivation. If the forests destroy in a mindless way,animals
    living in the forest can become extinct in several decades. Therefore, the ecosystem will be disturbed and starvation will be
    an inevitable result in this way. For instance, if an animal which is a food supply for people extincts, people are more likely to
    seek for another animals. However, if the other animals extinct,people have to seek for one another. This circle will certainly
    be deadlocked one day. Consequently,people may more likely to suffer from starvation and also animals will, too.

    Another effect of deforestation is global warming that is known as climate change. As we know the limit temperature of the
    world has been increasing to a high level year by year. Huge glaciers are melting in the North Pole and in The Antarctic.
    Therefore , sea level has been raising approximately 0,1 mm in a year. We can learn more about this increaisng from scientific
    studies about global warming. Because of the increase in sea levels, coasts of countries are morelikely to be under water.

    To sum up, climate change has dangerous effects on the world and on people. It should be regarded as the main environmental
    problem. We should take some measures like not to use sprays that reveal harmful gases to the atmosphere. For a good living ,
    we must be aware of these hazardous results.

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    değerlendirirseniz çok memnun olurum


    092: Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.




    Although many people prefer to live in places where weather conditions are same all the year, I personally agree with the idea that living in a places that the weather or climate changes several times in a year. It is a fact that climate effects people some ways. My reasoning behind my answer stems from three main ideas. Firstly, changeable weather provides us so much types of food resources. Secondly, it really effects our mood and finally, it supports us to different kinds of sports.

    To begin with, weather changes provides long range of fruits, vegetables and so forth. Due to the weather changes, food crops have a big diversity. Thus, unchangeable weather conditions supplies limited fruits and vegetables. On the other hand, if the weather changes several times in a year, of course, fruit, vegetables and other kind of foods have a great abundance and diversity.

    Secondly, it affects our mood too much. Recent researchs show that people who lives in stable weather conditions may have some mental illnesses. For example, if you live in an all the time cold, snowy places, you probably get in depression mode. Furthermore, even if you live in a touristic places that all the people want to live, you will need to go cold places after a small amount of time.

    Finally, changeable weathers support different kinds of sports like skiing on winter and surfing on summer. However, you are not able to do these sports when you live in places that have same climate. For instance, I both like summer and winter sports. Consequently, I do not want to travel different countries in a same year period to do sports.

    For all the reasons that I have stated above, I strongly prefer to live in a place that has changeable weather conditions.

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    daha iyi yazmak istiyorsanız, daha çok okumalısınız.Daha fazla yazı örnekleri burada bulabilirsiniz:
    TOEFL Writing Topics - TOEFL Test

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    Merhaba, foruma internette toefl ile ilgili arastirma yaparken denk geldim ve cok hosuma gitti. daha once toefl a girmedigim icin bu ilk deneyimim olacak ancak sinavdan sonra elimden geldigince tecrubelerimi paylasicam. sinava 21 ocakta istanbul ticaret universitesinde girecegim. http://www.testmagic.com/test/viewtopicsofessays6.asp bu adreste buldugum independent essay konularini hazirlik olsun diye yazmaya calisacagim. az once bir tanesini yazdim eger degerlendirebilirseniz cok memnun olurum degerli hocalarim.
    Essayin konusu : " Do you like working with your hands or working with machines ? "

    It is hard to deny the importance of working in modern world. On the whole, people don’t live without working because of life expenses. There are two working methods, which are working with hands and working with machines. If you have a chance to choose one of them, which one do you prefer? I prefer to work with machines. In this essay, I am going to talk about why I prefer working with machines by giving you three advantages of working with machines to support my choice.

    The first advantage of working with machines is about effort. For example, if you are working in a finance company and they are expecting from you to prepare some financial statements and charts, so you must arrange that reports to survive in this company. Preparing with hands or machines like computer and calculator, which one is the easiest way to make them? It is true without a doubt that machines will help you to make less effort while you arranging your job. To give another example, you can make calculations by only pressing the buttons of calculator; so you are absolutely make less effort than calculating manually.

    The next advantage is about speed. While you are writing a letter or a text, you can write faster on a computer than writing with your hand. Also you can carry heavy things to another place faster with a forklift than moving with your own power.

    The last but not least, is about safety. To make an example, bomb squads are using robots to defuse bombs, because using robots is safer than defusing it by themselves.

    In conclusion, I can say that working with machines have three advantage like making less effort, making your job speedy and safely. Also I highly recommend you use machines while you are working and only in a responsible way.
    Konu ymehmet tarafından (12-13-2011 Saat 01:23 AM ) değiştirilmiştir.

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    Merhabalar oncelıkle boyle bır ımkan gercekten cok onemlı bızler who are TOEFLer. Ben sunu merak edıyorum ne kadar zaman ıcerısınde feedback yapılıyor.

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    merhaba ben de toefl a 3 ay sonra gireceğim, en zayıf gördüğüm kısım olan writing ten çalışmaya başladım. barrons un kitabını çalışıyorum herkes öneririm. başlangıç olarak bir integrated essay yazdım, inceleyip değerlendirirseniz sevinirim.

    Saygılarımla.

    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sport activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reason and examples to support your opinion.



    In my humble opinion universities should pay more money to sports activites than libraries. Doing regular sports makes you more healthier than you are, teachs you how to be a part of a team and also prevents some harmful activities.
    In our modern life, key for a healthy life is doing regular sports activities. Which sport activities you choose, it makes you stronger and healthier. Become a strong and healthy person increases person’s self confident, too. Regular sports activites also leads to a healthy aging. It is very important, because in the this century people suffer several diseases at young ages.

    There are several type of sport activities, which are being played by teams, like football, basketball or vollayball. To perform these kind of sports teachs a person how to become part of a team. In our business life one of the most wanted specification is how you work in a team. You could definitely learn how to be a part of team doing this sports regularly. Doing sports also requries a solid discipline. To gain this discipline at young ages is a great chance.

    Sport activites also prevents harmful actions like using drugs. There are no spaces at sport activites for drug dealers or drug addicts. . It gives you a friendly environment, which includes healthy persons like you are. In order to have a good and clean college life, you need to have nice friends.
    As the above reasons a person may have more advantages by using regular sports. For this reasons i believe that universities should pay more money to the sport activities.

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    Öncelikle böyle bir uygulama yaptığınız için sizleri tebrik ederim . Bende kendimi denemek ve writting yollamak istiyorum hala puanlama yapıyormusunuz arkadaşlar ?

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    arkadaşlar ben de toefl a ilk defa girecem. yarın kursa başlıyorum. iü ingilizce işletmeden geçen yıl mezun oldum ama evde oturup ders çalışamadığım için kursa başlamaya karar verdim. ancak klasik olacak ama biz kendmiz gayret etmezsek kurs tek başına bişey katamaz. o yüzden böyle ortamlarda yazılarımızı paylaşmak ve üzerinde tartışmak gerçekten çok faydalı olur. birbirimizden birşeyler öğreniriz. güzel bi imkan ancak gördüğüm kadarıyla çok güncel değil. bence bu forumu tanıdığımız toefl hazırlanan kişilere de önerelim. daha hareketli olsun burası.
    let's start to write in english guys

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    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
    “it is easir to become an educated perason today than it was in the past.”

    Recently , at least there is one university nearly in all citises.And there are a lot of private university preparation course and also various of study boks are selling.In addition many private education institution serve people to become educated on kindly branches.For instance comptuer skills, accountancy etc..But it was so difficult in the past.
    Firstly, in the past , the only purpose of life is to earn Money for not to stay hungry.People was indigent.It was also difficult to earn Money.Children were going to shcool until they graduated from primary school or until they learnt reading and writing.Parents did not care about education of their children.After graduating from primary school or learnt how to write and read they put an end to their education life.Then began to work to earn money for for their family.They were working on fields or in a construction or they were selling something.
    Secondly it was also difficult to go to a univesity indeed.The numbers of univesities were limited.And they were not any private courses.Even if there were private courses people could not go these courses.Inasmuch as they had not enough Money.So people was studying by oneself.
    In Brief today’s conditions are too fine rather than past.People’s economic situation is good.And as i said that there are diverse of private education institutions therefore according to these reasons, it becomes easier to be an educated person.


    Şimdiden çok teşekkür ediyorumm..

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    Arkadaslar selam, oncelıkle sızı tebrık etmek ıstıyorum gercekten emegı gecen herkese tek tek tsk etmek ıstıyorum.
    Ben degerlendırılmesı ıcın sızınle bı writing paylasmayı dusunuyordum. Yazılanların tarıhıne bakıyorumda baya eksı, gelen wrıtınglerı degerlendırmeye devam edıyor musunuz??

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    WRıtıngler hala eğerlendiriliyor mu?

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    suanda maalesef devam etmiyor tekrar organize etmeye calisiyoruz ayarlayabilirsek burdan tekrar duyurusu yapacagiz

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    Merhaba yeni uye oldum ama sanirim devam etmiyor degerlendirmeler. Ben yinede tecrubeli arkadaslarin goz gezdirmesi icin yazdigim bir essayi paylasiyim. Daha once hic girmedim toefla ve hic bilmiyorum bu tarz bir essay kac puan alabilir.

    Some people prefer to live in a small town, others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in?

    Many people believe that living in big city centers is better than living in a small town beacuse of some conveniences such as quality of education, free-time activities, being close to center. Consequently, city centers are getting more and more crowded every day. However, I prefer to live in a small town beacuse crowded cities have some problems such as traffic, pollution, lack of interaction among people. Also I love nature and living in green areas which big cities do not have.
    Big cities have many people who are trying to live together. If city’s infrastructure is not enough for population, it may cause traffic. People tries to go to work every morning and tries to back home every evening. In a city that haven’t adequate facilities such as public transport, people may be late for work and home. Also more time in roads means more stress and sadness. In addition, inadequate infrastructure cause pollution. Millions of cars expose gas to air and millions of houses produce garbages that will eventually go to oceans. However, you don’t need to handle them in a small town.
    Good relationship with people is major part of our lives. In a small town we can always fell the amazing feeling of neighborhood. Since less people live in small towns, everybody knows each other. You can rely on your neighbor next to you when you are on holiday. You can chat with people when you run across them at shopping. It’s good to know your butcher and his son. Interaction with people always calm you down and cause to live a quality life.
    Another reason that i like small towns is that I like nature and green. Big cities are getting more and more crowded and current buildings can not answer the population. So, many green areas unfortunately are being destroyed in order to create more living areas. But I believe that people can not live with only concrete and iron. They need trees, green lands, bird sounds due to go away from stress of work.
    Living in a city centers may have some facilities such as being close to oppurtunities and activities. But i prefer to live in a small town because i like to live less stressfull life and these days, there is just chaos in big cities.

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