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The Effects of Deforestation


Deforstation is a situation that results in devastating effects.Not only the ecosystem and nature are being affected
but also people. Some of these effects range from starvation to global warming. Our world prones to these bad effects
in recent years.

One of the dangerous effects of deforestation is starvation. Many of our forests which are the main sources of oxygen have
been destroying for such reasons like building a construction and cultivation. If the forests destroy in a mindles way,animals
living in the forest can became extinct in several decades. Therefore, the ecosystem will bw disturbed and starvation will be
an inevitable result in this way. For instance, if an animal which is a food supply for people extincts, people are more likely to
seek for another animals. However, if the other animals extinct,people have to seek for one another. This circle will certainly
be deadlocked one day. Consequently,people may more likely to suffer from starvation and also animals will, too.

Another effect of deforestation is global warming that is known as climate change. As we know the limit temperature of the
world has been increasing to a high level year by year. Huge glaciers are melting in the North Pole and in The Antarctic.
Therefore , sea level has been raising approximately 0,1 mm in a year. We can learn more about this increaisng from scientific
studies about global warming. Because of the increase in sea levels, coasts of countries are morelikely to be under water.

To sum up, climate change has dangerous effects on the world and on people. It should be regarded as the main environmental
problem. We should take some measures like not to use sprays that reveal harmful gases to the atmosphere. For a good living ,
we must be aware of these hazardous results.

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merhaba yeni üye oldum foruma. Böyle bir writing ile yaklaşık kaç puan alabilirim ?

The Effects of Deforestation


Deforstation is a situation that results in devastating effects.Not only the ecosystem and nature are being affected
but also people. Some of these effects range from starvation to global warming. Our world prones to these bad effects
in recent years.

One of the dangerous effects of deforestation is starvation. Many of our forests which are the main sources of oxygen have
been destroying for such reasons like building a construction and cultivation. If the forests destroy in a mindless way,animals
living in the forest can become extinct in several decades. Therefore, the ecosystem will be disturbed and starvation will be
an inevitable result in this way. For instance, if an animal which is a food supply for people extincts, people are more likely to
seek for another animals. However, if the other animals extinct,people have to seek for one another. This circle will certainly
be deadlocked one day. Consequently,people may more likely to suffer from starvation and also animals will, too.

Another effect of deforestation is global warming that is known as climate change. As we know the limit temperature of the
world has been increasing to a high level year by year. Huge glaciers are melting in the North Pole and in The Antarctic.
Therefore , sea level has been raising approximately 0,1 mm in a year. We can learn more about this increaisng from scientific
studies about global warming. Because of the increase in sea levels, coasts of countries are morelikely to be under water.

To sum up, climate change has dangerous effects on the world and on people. It should be regarded as the main environmental
problem. We should take some measures like not to use sprays that reveal harmful gases to the atmosphere. For a good living ,
we must be aware of these hazardous results.

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092: Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.




Although many people prefer to live in places where weather conditions are same all the year, I personally agree with the idea that living in a places that the weather or climate changes several times in a year. It is a fact that climate effects people some ways. My reasoning behind my answer stems from three main ideas. Firstly, changeable weather provides us so much types of food resources. Secondly, it really effects our mood and finally, it supports us to different kinds of sports.

To begin with, weather changes provides long range of fruits, vegetables and so forth. Due to the weather changes, food crops have a big diversity. Thus, unchangeable weather conditions supplies limited fruits and vegetables. On the other hand, if the weather changes several times in a year, of course, fruit, vegetables and other kind of foods have a great abundance and diversity.

Secondly, it affects our mood too much. Recent researchs show that people who lives in stable weather conditions may have some mental illnesses. For example, if you live in an all the time cold, snowy places, you probably get in depression mode. Furthermore, even if you live in a touristic places that all the people want to live, you will need to go cold places after a small amount of time.

Finally, changeable weathers support different kinds of sports like skiing on winter and surfing on summer. However, you are not able to do these sports when you live in places that have same climate. For instance, I both like summer and winter sports. Consequently, I do not want to travel different countries in a same year period to do sports.

For all the reasons that I have stated above, I strongly prefer to live in a place that has changeable weather conditions.

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TOEFL Writing Topics - TOEFL Test

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Essayin konusu : " Do you like working with your hands or working with machines ? "

It is hard to deny the importance of working in modern world. On the whole, people don’t live without working because of life expenses. There are two working methods, which are working with hands and working with machines. If you have a chance to choose one of them, which one do you prefer? I prefer to work with machines. In this essay, I am going to talk about why I prefer working with machines by giving you three advantages of working with machines to support my choice.

The first advantage of working with machines is about effort. For example, if you are working in a finance company and they are expecting from you to prepare some financial statements and charts, so you must arrange that reports to survive in this company. Preparing with hands or machines like computer and calculator, which one is the easiest way to make them? It is true without a doubt that machines will help you to make less effort while you arranging your job. To give another example, you can make calculations by only pressing the buttons of calculator; so you are absolutely make less effort than calculating manually.

The next advantage is about speed. While you are writing a letter or a text, you can write faster on a computer than writing with your hand. Also you can carry heavy things to another place faster with a forklift than moving with your own power.

The last but not least, is about safety. To make an example, bomb squads are using robots to defuse bombs, because using robots is safer than defusing it by themselves.

In conclusion, I can say that working with machines have three advantage like making less effort, making your job speedy and safely. Also I highly recommend you use machines while you are working and only in a responsible way.

Merhabalar oncelıkle boyle bır ımkan gercekten cok onemlı bızler who are TOEFLer. Ben sunu merak edıyorum ne kadar zaman ıcerısınde feedback yapılıyor.

merhaba ben de toefl a 3 ay sonra gireceğim, en zayıf gördüğüm kısım olan writing ten çalışmaya başladım. barrons un kitabını çalışıyorum herkes öneririm. başlangıç olarak bir integrated essay yazdım, inceleyip değerlendirirseniz sevinirim.

Saygılarımla.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sport activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reason and examples to support your opinion.



In my humble opinion universities should pay more money to sports activites than libraries. Doing regular sports makes you more healthier than you are, teachs you how to be a part of a team and also prevents some harmful activities.
In our modern life, key for a healthy life is doing regular sports activities. Which sport activities you choose, it makes you stronger and healthier. Become a strong and healthy person increases person’s self confident, too. Regular sports activites also leads to a healthy aging. It is very important, because in the this century people suffer several diseases at young ages.

There are several type of sport activities, which are being played by teams, like football, basketball or vollayball. To perform these kind of sports teachs a person how to become part of a team. In our business life one of the most wanted specification is how you work in a team. You could definitely learn how to be a part of team doing this sports regularly. Doing sports also requries a solid discipline. To gain this discipline at young ages is a great chance.

Sport activites also prevents harmful actions like using drugs. There are no spaces at sport activites for drug dealers or drug addicts. . It gives you a friendly environment, which includes healthy persons like you are. In order to have a good and clean college life, you need to have nice friends.
As the above reasons a person may have more advantages by using regular sports. For this reasons i believe that universities should pay more money to the sport activities.

Öncelikle böyle bir uygulama yaptığınız için sizleri tebrik ederim . Bende kendimi denemek ve writting yollamak istiyorum hala puanlama yapıyormusunuz arkadaşlar ?

arkadaşlar ben de toefl a ilk defa girecem. yarın kursa başlıyorum. iü ingilizce işletmeden geçen yıl mezun oldum ama evde oturup ders çalışamadığım için kursa başlamaya karar verdim. ancak klasik olacak ama biz kendmiz gayret etmezsek kurs tek başına bişey katamaz. o yüzden böyle ortamlarda yazılarımızı paylaşmak ve üzerinde tartışmak gerçekten çok faydalı olur. birbirimizden birşeyler öğreniriz. güzel bi imkan ancak gördüğüm kadarıyla çok güncel değil. bence bu forumu tanıdığımız toefl hazırlanan kişilere de önerelim. daha hareketli olsun burası.
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