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Konu: Arkadaşlar bu başlık altında yyazdığımız ESSAY leri başkalarına kontrol ettirelim.

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    Arkadaşlar bu başlık altında yyazdığımız ESSAY leri başkalarına kontrol ettirelim.

    Merhaba arkadaşlar, önümüzdeki şubat ayında toefl sınavına gireceğim ve essay yazma konusunda kendimi biraz eksik görüyorum. Düzenli olarak essay yazmaya karar verdim ama yazdığım essaylerin de bir şekilde kontrol edilmesi gerekiyor diye düşünüyorum hatalarımı görmek amacıyla. Bu konu üzerinden birbirimizle essaylerimizi paylaşabilir ve essaylerimizin başkalarının gözüyle görülebilmesini sağlarız.

    Öncelikle paylaşımı ben yapıyorum. aşağıda aynı konu hakkında yazmış olduğum 2 farklı essayi paylaşıyorum ilginize teşekkür ederim. Bu arada essayin konusu "Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life" dır.

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    Arkadaşlar dosyaları yükleyemedim o yüzden buraya olduğu gibi yapıştırıyorum.
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    I agree that childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.I have couple reasons of this. As a child, you may have less responsibility, more fun. Do not have to worry about future. You know that all the interest will be on you.

    First of all, everytime I think about my responsibilities, I always remember that how happy I was in my childhood. At that times, I had no responsibilities and as a conclusion of this, I had more fun. For example, once, we were going to a park place and I was enjoying with that day, suddenly sawing one of my friends who is older than me, was absolutely upset. Because he had to pass the exam to get in a University. I felt much more lucky myself.

    Secondly, living as a child have some advantages such as; not worrying about what to eat, how to earn money or have to be a good worker, employer, etc.. For instance, one day I was walking towards my house after such a long time working and I saw my child having too much joy without any expecting from the life. He was just enjoying with the day and every time he could find the foods to eat and place to sleep and something else. I thought to myself what a great thing being a child, missing my childhood times.

    Thirdly, If you are child, you know that everyone's interest and all cares on you. You feel like you are the one who is hallowed. For example, As a human beings, every people love childs because they mustn't have sins, they are totaly pure, their feelings are just as likely as angels are. And, that's why you can not take your eyes out of a child due to the fact that you want to protect this beauties.

    So, to sum up, I firmly believe that childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. You can enjoy with your each day, you can relax and take a time to your friends and you will be loved each day in your childhood time.

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    İkincisi;

    I personally agree with the assertion that Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. This opinion is based on some notions such as, the feeling that do not have to worry about worl-related problems; all you need to think about is games; and you know that all the attentions will be on you and you are going to feel blessed.

    To start with, I believe that you do not have to worry about worl-related problems if you are child. For example, when I was a child, there was a crisis in my hometown and everyone was stressed knowing that they might not find money to survive except children. Children do no know anything about it and they continue to receive their daily food and there is no thing to effects their usual life.

    In addition to the issue, I think that all you need to think about is games as a child. For instance, if you are child who is younger than the other children. You may not have too much homeworks and most of your day you can spend your time playing games. In this way, this things going to effect your mental and they make you much more happier than anyone elses.

    Finally, people also let you know that all their attention will be on you and this way you are going to feel blessed, for sure. According to my chilhood, I was the child who is loved all the time by someone. I remember that everytime when we have guests in our house, every one was trying to rub my head and make eye contanct with me. At that times I knew that they all wanted to love me . I was feeling that.

    For the reasons explored above, I strongly feel that Childhood must be the happiest time of anyone's life. Feeling of be away from obligatory, think about games all day ong and feel anyone elses attention on you, are going to make you feel blessed and happier than usual.

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    İkincisi;

    I personally agree with the assertion that Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. This opinion is based on some notions such as, the feeling that do not have to worry about worl-related problems; all you need to think about is games; and you know that all the attentions will be on you and you are going to feel blessed.

    To start with, I believe that you do not have to worry about worl-related problems if you are child. For example, when I was a child, there was a crisis in my hometown and everyone was stressed knowing that they might not find money to survive except children. Children do no know anything about it and they continue to receive their daily food and there is no thing to effects their usual life.

    In addition to the issue, I think that all you need to think about is games as a child. For instance, if you are child who is younger than the other children. You may not have too much homeworks and most of your day you can spend your time playing games. In this way, this things going to effect your mental and they make you much more happier than anyone elses.

    Finally, people also let you know that all their attention will be on you and this way you are going to feel blessed, for sure. According to my chilhood, I was the child who is loved all the time by someone. I remember that everytime when we have guests in our house, every one was trying to rub my head and make eye contanct with me. At that times I knew that they all wanted to love me . I was feeling that.

    For the reasons explored above, I strongly feel that Childhood must be the happiest time of anyone's life. Feeling of be away from obligatory, think about games all day ong and feel anyone elses attention on you, are going to make you feel blessed and happier than usual.

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