Ynt: Toefl Writing lerinizi Değerlendiriyoruz...
You did not mention about my introduction... :) I focused my introduction this time, actually I liked it, and to be honestl, I did not want to write last paragraphs because I you've already shown my mistakes. Grammar mistakes inevitable for me because I am too careless while I am writing. Also you did not give any score :)
Actually this was my last essay, I don't want to write any more, because it is last 3 days for me, and I want to more focus on speaking and listening parts in that time. You always been very kind and I want to thank you again for your great support. You are filling the meaning of the "TEACHER"
And you have been a good student. İ have added a comment to your introduction:) unfortunately, although you have tried new structures and to some extent successfully. Your last essay is still worth only three points due to the number of grammar mistakes present. Keep it simple and stick to what you are confident with and i am sure you will get the 3.5 you are looking for.
Ynt: Toefl Writing lerinizi Değerlendiriyoruz...
İ didnt need to focus on your introduction cos it was fine. Well done. Forgive me, i wrote my response whilst doing a thousand other things. İ am saddened that this will be your last essay as i have enjoyed marking them. İ am sure you will do fine on the exam (in fact i am sure). You do, however, need to take a little more care with your grammar:) Anyway, İ believe, that we will be seeing each other tomorrow on the free on-line course. Mr. Volkan contacted me just two days ago to see, if İ could do it. Apparently, it was to do with the writting section, but i am going to open it up so that whoever comes can ask me anything about the exam. (including all sections:) İf i do not see you simemis, i really do wish you the best of luck on your exam on the 15th (the same goes for you to zea;) hopefully i will see another essay from you before your exam)
Ynt: Toefl Writing lerinizi Değerlendiriyoruz...
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