The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

It it obviously clear that the world became great changes in the twentieth century especially at technological improvements. Many people may think that television, mobile phone, internet or google are some of the most important changes in this century but from my opinion the most magnificent change is sending and receiving e-mail via internet.

In the past decades people have to write letters and post them to their family living at outside countries but today we could send email containing unlimited count of words. When our family check its email account he or she see all the things you wrote 5 minutes ago. So we don’t need to wait the letter will go to the outside country.

Furthermore, we can add some files to the emails. If we want we can share a document, a photo, a song or a short movie to the email. For example we can send one of the best photos of İstanbul to our friend who is living in England and has not been in İstanbul for a long time.

In addition and more surprisingly all of these email communications are free of charge. People who have an internet access could easily create an email address and send or receive email using this account.

Finally, because of the reasons I described above I think email communication is one of the most great changes that makes our life easier in the twentieth century.

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