Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are
the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.

People learn continuosly during their life time from their environments such as family, schools and social groups.It is important for rest of our lives to gather informations (information uncountable and singular) and to get education educated by attending schools, and to interact with other people or friends. However, families shape us in the early stages of our lives which is more important than other aspects in my opinion. Therefore, i believe that parents are the best teachers because of the following particular specific reasons.

Firstly, parents teach values which are important for children in order to have a good and strong character. Begining with the early ages at a young age, families try to teach their children good traits. Every parents wants to raise their child as an to be honest, trustable and hardworking person. It is obvious for everybody that these characteristics properties can only be built in the family. At this point, the importance and essential of the a family education gets more clear. For example, in our country there is a proverb, ``The tree can be bend only when it is young.``, which is specifically related with this issue. Moral attitudes and behavioral habits can be taught only during the childhood. Therefore, parental education is significant in order to teach values to the child.
Just a quick point on using quotations; although a very useful device they are easily used incorrectly and in the wrong place. Your use of the Turkish proverb here has worked well, but don't get too carried away:)

Secondly, parents know their own child beter than anyone. They are aware of what child can do, what he or she likes or what the child is capable of. In other words skills, habits, good or bad traits of the child are known by the family members. Having information about abilities and potential of the children, parents and family members have a significant advantages to reach their children and to provide communication with them. Neither school teachers nor friends can build better comunication than parents with own child regardless of issue. Thats to say, it is obvious that the more you know the student, the more you can teach.

Really, this didn't work as well as your first supporting paragraph. It is lacking a strong example to support your argument. Don't forget that the examples you give are just as important as the reasons! It is obvious that you have missed out on some of the important points I have made in the previous essays above. Before writing a second essay, I would like you to go back and read through my notes on the other essays.

In conclusion, because of the above reasons i believe that parents have significant and primary role as a perfect teacher in the children’s lives. Although, friends and teachers have effects on us during our lives, the effects of our best teachers are beyond comparison.

VERDICT: Not bad for a first attempt. Your essay despite constant grammatical mistakes is well organized and well balanced and the mistakes you have made do not really make it too difficult to understand. Keep up the hard work and I am sure you will see your scores slowly improve over time. 3 points