TOPIC:Some people think that it is best for extended families to live together. Other people think that it is best for nuclear family to live away from the extended family. Which type of family living arrangment do you think is the most beneficial? Use specific reasons to support ypur response.



EXTENDED FAMILY

Some people prefer live to a small family but some of them prefer to live extended family. Small family consists of children,mother and father. Extended family consists of children, mother and father and also maybe grandparents. In my opinion live in extended family is prefered. Because lve in extended family has an some advantaguous. These advantagenous is that family members help eachother and the second one is family traditions carry over the next generations. In my essay I will explain these advantegous deplly.

The first advantage is that family members help one another. For example, I live in an extended family. I live with my grandmother and she helps my mother to with her daily works like as cooking or cleaning. Because my mother works at a job, she cannot cook in weekdays during the week. Unless my grandmother lives with us, my mother can suffer from time manage. This sentence needs rewriting Moreover, ın extended families, family memebers can help one anther to raise a child. For instance my grandmother helps my mother to raise my brother. If she doesn’t live with us, my mother can find a person who we don’t recognize beforehand. And it can be very diffucult for us. This is a strong enough argument to justify a second supporting paragraph

The second advantages is that in the extended families, family tranditions can continue generation to generation. Because mostly grandparents conditional upon their traditions and they always illumunate and apply this. Because of this reason children can learn their tradionation unconsciously. For this way family traditions can pass next generious which is teached by garndparents. It is clearly obvious that live in extended family is important for us to maintance the family traditions next generations. For example in my family, we visit our small village everyfeast and we always prepare a traditonal dessert. I learned this my grandparents and I am going to learn it my children.


In conclusion, living in extended family some advantageos. Family members help one another to do daily works,raise children. And It is important for family tranditions. Thanks to elders of families, children can learn their traditions and they can teach this their children. Actually I prefered to live extended family because of this reasons.

Overall due the number of basic mistakes that you have made throughout your essay (examples of which can be found in your first supporting paragraph), I am afraid that this essay is worth no more than 3 points.

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