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Essayin konusu : " Do you like working with your hands or working with machines ? "

It is hard to deny the importance of working in modern world. On the whole, people don’t live without working because of life expenses. There are two working methods, which are working with hands and working with machines. If you have a chance to choose one of them, which one do you prefer? I prefer to work with machines. In this essay, I am going to talk about why I prefer working with machines by giving you three advantages of working with machines to support my choice.

The first advantage of working with machines is about effort. For example, if you are working in a finance company and they are expecting from you to prepare some financial statements and charts, so you must arrange that reports to survive in this company. Preparing with hands or machines like computer and calculator, which one is the easiest way to make them? It is true without a doubt that machines will help you to make less effort while you arranging your job. To give another example, you can make calculations by only pressing the buttons of calculator; so you are absolutely make less effort than calculating manually.

The next advantage is about speed. While you are writing a letter or a text, you can write faster on a computer than writing with your hand. Also you can carry heavy things to another place faster with a forklift than moving with your own power.

The last but not least, is about safety. To make an example, bomb squads are using robots to defuse bombs, because using robots is safer than defusing it by themselves.

In conclusion, I can say that working with machines have three advantage like making less effort, making your job speedy and safely. Also I highly recommend you use machines while you are working and only in a responsible way.