In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and offices buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to explain you answer


Cigarettes has have been used for pleasure since than it tobacco was found discovered in America. At the beginning, it was so popular that no one would mind cared if it was harmful or not. However, even if it was recognized that cigarette is more harmful for nonsmokers than smokers , taken no caution until near pastthis sentence has very little meaning. According to me , prohibiting smoking in public places is the perfect a great rule which should be taken have been introduced many years ago .There are several reasons to support this idea such as personal rights, being able to use public places and breathing clean air.


To start with, it is obvious that public places, public transportation, governmental areas and bus stations are the places which are often used in a typical day for smoking. Wouldn’t you mind if a person next to you started smoking in one of these areas although you don’t smoke. No one has right to take granted other’s health and life quality. It is a fact that smokers can cause serious health problems for nonsmokers by smoking adjacent them. There is no difference between an intentional murder and this situation.


In addition to this, every individual has equal rights to use public places without concern. For instance, when we go outside with our children, we often use public transportation. No one has right to poison our children for their sake of pleasure. Cigarette smoke, as we all know , is very harmful not only for smokers but also nonsmokers. So, government should provide us confidence for use of its transportation facilities healthily and it can only be without cigarette smoke.


All in all, smoking is more injurious for nonsmokers than smokers. Allowing smoking in public places means murdering people who don’t smoke. In order to prevent this unacceptable situation, government must take precautions , in which most important obligation is prohibiting smoking in public places legally.

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