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Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The majority of people believe that, the improvements and investigations that are done by humans , make the Earth a better place to live.In deciding, as to wheather or not, Earth is being harmed by human activities,there do exist variant perspectives,some of which,I agree with.This situation based on some notions, such as, people make enviroment dirty and they finish the natural resources.
To begin with, people make the enviroment dirty increadebly. To highlight this point, lets say, lots of factories were constructed,as a result of this, there are a great deal of garbage of these factories. The owner of the factories should provide solution about these garbages but they generally choose the easy way and drop all the garbage to the sea so plenty of sea spicies might die. Also goverments should avoid this situation but most of them deal with only taxes. Especially in winters, people need to warm up and to overcome warming they cut trees. Moreover, people cause air pollution by fires.
In addition to previous point, nowadays the population of the Earth increased rapidly besides they do not care about the natural balance of the Earth. As a result of this, they need more sources and they damage more the natural life. As an illustrution, according to evidence the amount of the drink water in the World may finish in a few centuries. People should not waste water. In addition, people start to hunt more wild animals and this may cause extinction of some spicies.
In conclusion, the arguments proved that, people make Earth dirtier and waste the resources so the Earth is being harmed by human activities. From my perspective people should be careful about the Earth, due to the fact that, their children will may live in a dirty and unsatisfied place.